a land speed record writing this one here
Jun. 5th, 2007 11:17 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Why might it be, and what all could it mean?
I go to these so often, 'cept when I'm
such that I can't remember how you make
or use simple devices 'round the house---
exempli gratia: a bathtub bong.*
This time it's 14 lines, too, but extemp-
oraneous. Geez---lame enjambment,
fflo.
Well, what do you expect,
fflo? Genius? Shit,
you've had three hours' sleep in two full days.
(Am I to 14 lines yet? 1, 2, 3 ...)
I dash it off; I think it through not 'tall.
This is the very opposite of that
why it might be and what all it could mean
I'm so damned dogged by much the sober time.
*that line tacked on days later, for 14
I go to these so often, 'cept when I'm
such that I can't remember how you make
or use simple devices 'round the house---
exempli gratia: a bathtub bong.*
This time it's 14 lines, too, but extemp-
oraneous. Geez---lame enjambment,
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Well, what do you expect,
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you've had three hours' sleep in two full days.
(Am I to 14 lines yet? 1, 2, 3 ...)
I dash it off; I think it through not 'tall.
This is the very opposite of that
why it might be and what all it could mean
I'm so damned dogged by much the sober time.
*that line tacked on days later, for 14